Friday, 29 January 2021

The First World War=The Great War

 With the train built, the uprising of 1885 squashed,  Indigenous and Metis people cleared away and settlers flooding in, wheat became king. There were some issues, like the Manitoba Schools Question, and trade with the United States, but the next big problem was The First World War, also called The Great War. It was a grim war with a high rate of attrition. 

Read about life on the Front here. At the bottom of the page there is a link that will read the page to you. Be prepared to ace the quiz afterwards. 


Cause of the First World War-Notes





How the War Started


How it was a World War






Wednesday, 27 January 2021

Human Rights and voting

On this day women in Manitoba were the first women in Canada allowed to vote, but only certain women. Women though were still not legally considered people till 15 years later.

The scene above is a re-enactment of a show held at the Burton Cummings Theatre (used to be the Walker)

 


The History of Women’s Vote


Read the The History of Women's vote (Nellie McClung was from Manitoba, she moved to Alberta later), watch the video clips, and then complete your handout sheet The Right to Vote

Much more information can also be found below 

Women's Suffrage in Canada

Commercial 3

 



Posted

 Frost-Protagonist, story told through his point of view. Parents recently split, dad lives in Florida, Frost moved to the South shore of the Great Lakes with his mom. He won a writing award

Bench-Frost's first friend at BMS. He plays a lot of sports, but doesn't start. He gives Frost and his friends some crede 

DeeDee-A nerd who loves drama. Plays Dungeon and Dragons and roles dice to make all his important life decisions

Wolf-A piano prodigy, so nickname after Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart. He is calm, collected, and the voice of reason

Setting-Not a rich town, and Frost with his new family arrangement is on the lower end of the economic scale. They are now in grade 8 in Middle School


Intial Action-Ruby Sandles has her phone confiscated with an insulting text about a teacher who have her a bad mark. Principal Wittingham has now banned all phones from going past the school office. 

Tuesday, 26 January 2021

Story Update

 600 words due today


Due date for completed story in two weeks?


What should be well established now is setting and Characters


Setting

4 lots of descriptive words to describe location/ mood

3Some descriptive words

2 Limited description of place

1

Location . . .?

Characters

4 Identifies main character(s) with lots of description / detail

3 Identifies main character(s) and explains their roles

2 Identifies character(s) without much explaining

1Character must be in witness protection


Notes

 The following notes should be in you binder, filed in an easy to find location, and preferably written out by you or at least with your own annotations. 

Language Arts

Poetry 


Story Structure


Grammar-Mechanics


Persuasive Techniques-Commercials




Social Studies

1930s

1920s

Vimy Ridge

First World War

BNA Act-Canadian Govt division of powers

Reasons for Confederation

Manitoba before 1867-Grade 5 Review







Monday, 25 January 2021

Coming Up

 Delving into the First World War

Some more picture book reading

More of the book PostIt

Meaning of Home writing and PERMISSSION FORMS 

More of our Survival Story


Friday, 22 January 2021

Let it Go


 



Let It Go
The snow glows white on the mountain tonight
Not a footprint to be seen
A kingdom of isolation
And it looks like I'm the queen
The wind is howling like this swirling storm inside
Couldn't keep it in, heaven knows I've tried
Don't let them in, don't let them see
Be the good girl you always have to be
Conceal, don't feel, don't let them know
Well, now they know
Let it go, let it go
Can't hold it back anymore
Let it go, let it go
Turn away and slam the door
I don't care what they're going to say
Let the storm rage on
The cold never bothered me anyway 3
It's funny how some distance makes everything seem small
And the fears that once controlled me can't get to me at all
It's time to see what I can do
To test the limits and break through
No right, no wrong, no rules for me
I'm free
Let it go, let it go
I am one with the wind and sky
Let it go, let it go
You'll never see me cry
Here I stand and here I stay
Let the storm rage on
My power flurries through the air into the ground
My soul is spiraling in frozen fractals all around
And one thought crystallizes like an icy blast
I'm never going back, the past is in the past 6
Let it go, let it go
When I'll rise like the break of dawn
Let it go, let it go
That perfect girl is gone
Here I stand in the light of day
Let the storm rage on
The cold never bothered me anyway

Thursday, 21 January 2021

To Build a Fire

Foreshadowing-A warning of what is going to happen


1. Setting-describe in 2 well chosen words
2. Conflict-Use your note sheet to answer
3. Initial Action is the situation. Explain, remember your answer to number 2
4. Rising Action-When was this the most intense?
5. Climax: The part of the story with the most action/suspense. A little broader in this story. Where does it end? Clue-woof
6. Falling Action:
7. Resolution:

Consult the story handed out to you in answering

Story is also here

Read along

As a movie

An Animation





The Meaning of Home

 Another writing contest. This one is short. 50 to 300 words on The Meaning of Home.  What is special about this contest is that EVERY entry means a $10 donation to Habitat for Humanity. Habitat for Humanity is a non-profit organization that builds houses for those that have a problem affording a place to live. Here is last year winners for the writing contest



HERE’S A CHECKLIST OF THINGS TO LOOK FOR 

 • Is every paragraph indented at the beginning? 

• Do all sentences begin with a capital letter? 

• Do all the sentences of your story make sense? 

• Does your story have a variety of long and short sentences? 

• Is there a variety of words in your story? 

• Did you use descriptive words? 

• Do you overuse a word? 

• Is the spelling correct? (Be careful of words that sound the same but have different meanings. For example: ‘no’ and ‘know’). 

• Will the reader understand what the meaning of home means to you? 

• Does the story have a good title? 


Feb 19 is when the contest closes. 

Wednesday, 20 January 2021

Homesteading

Go to this link and look at the picture at the top of an early homestead.

Look closely and study the picture. This a primary source of information. Look closely at the other pictures, they give a lot of information. 


Answer below

Read the letter that follows a little below the picture of the early home, at #3.
1. What would be different about a picnic today and one a hundred years ago?

2.What would be still the same?

Read #9

3. An acre is about the size of a soccer field. How long would it take to break it? How much would this cost if you hired someone?

Read #10, 

4. What advice does the woman give that applies today to people looking for relationships online?


Thinking and using your general knowledge


5 . What food would homesteaders here on the prairies eat come April?


When done, quietly read the other information on the pages and/or pick up your reading book, and/or onto your writing. 

Tuesday, 19 January 2021

Part 2 of your Survival Story

Did you do a solid job in part 1 of describing mood, character(s), setting? If not, get it done.  Now as the story progresses, we need some rising action, suspense, mystery, something to hook the reader to keep her eyes on the page. 

Due Tuesday, Jan 26, the first 600 words of your story. 

I vs Me

If you are the subject of the sentence use I.

  • After I drank my coffee, I was very happy.
  • I asked Arriana to help with the project.


If you are not the subject (just the object of the action), use me.

  • My mother told me to focus on my studies.
  • The ball came flying through the air and hit me on the head.
  • The weather looks very cold to me.

In sentences like those above, we don't tend to make mistakes. Our mistakes tend to happen when we group Me or I with a noun

  • The referee was looking at Jack and . . . (me, I)

To determine if the usage of "I" is correct, all you have to do is take out "Jack" to isolate the first-person pronoun:


  • The officer was looking at me.
The referee was looking at Jack and me

  • Neco and . . . (me,I)  are excited to go to the concert.
I am excited to go to the concert

Neco and I are excited to go to the concert.

Monday, 18 January 2021

MLK Day in the United States today

 Today in the United States they celebrate Martin Luther King Jr. Day. Fifty years ago this King was involved in a march in Selma to bring attention to voter rights, which was a recent movie playing in local theatres. One of the participants, John, Lewis, had his skull crushed. A few earlier years earlier, John Lewis was also hospitalized because he was beaten for daring to ride a bus with white people. John Lewis was also was  accused by Trump as being all talk, no action. 


Reflections  of the march from Mrs Robinson, who was left for dead. The advice of the police was to leave the bodies “for the buzzards to eat.” 

 Above is a song about the event, you might have heard the song. Did you know what the song was about?  Why would the state troopers' treatment of Mrs Robinson eventually advance the cause of voter rights?

Another (was) famous person who was mistreated











U.N. Declaration of Children's Rights

Also here





Persuasive Writing: This is a huge skill to advocate for a change. Ms Carey is doing persuasive writing with you right now. Here is one technique- Near the beginning  have an easily identified thesis statement. The use of facts and quotations will help your argument. End with a strong statement.

An example of the structure:

1st Sentence-Attention grabbing
2nd Sentence-Thesis Statement
Following Sentences-Facts, Quotations to support your argument. Figurative Language to keep the reader's attention
2nd last Sentence-Restate your thesis.
Land Sentence-Finish with a strong, memorable statement.




- Day 2 Today. Tuesday and Wednesday will be Day 3

-MLK Day

-Going onto the First World War in Social Studies

-Commercials, PostIt, Our Survival Story, and possibly a short story this week

-As always, Friday is early entry and hot chocolate





Friday, 15 January 2021

The Railway across Canada




 There was a time in this fair land when the railroad did not run

When the wild majestic mountains stood alone against the sun
Long before the white man and long before the wheel
When the green dark forest was too silent to be real
But time has no beginning and the history has no bound
As to this verdant country they came from all around
They sailed upon her waterways and they walked the forest tall
Built the mines, the mills and the factories for the good of us all
And when the young mans fancy has turned into the spring
The railroad men grew restless for to hear the hammers ring
Their minds were overflowing with the visions of their day
Where many a fortune lost and won and many a debt to pay
For they looked in the future and what did they see
They saw an iron road runnin' from the sea to the sea
Bringin' the goods to a young growin' land
All up from the seaboards and into their hands
Look away sad days
Across this mighty land
From the eastern shore
To the western strand
Bring in the workers and bring up the rails
We got to lay down the track and tear up the trails
Open your heart let the life blood flow
We got to get on our way 'cause we're movin' to slow
Bring in the workers and bring up the rails
We got to lay down the track and tear up the trails
Open your heart, let the life blood flow
We got to get on our way 'cause we're movin' too slow
Get on our way 'cause we're movin' too slow
Behind the blue Rockies the sun is declinin'
Stars have come stealin' at the close of the day
Across the wide prairies our loved ones lie sleeping
Beyond the dark ocean in a place far away
We are the maries who work upon the railway
Swingin' our hammers in the bright blazin' sun
Livin' on stew and drinkin' bad whiskey
Bendin' our backs 'till the long days are done
We are the maries who work upon the railway
Swingin' our hammers in the bright blazin' sun
Layin' down track and buildin' the bridges
Bendin' our backs 'till the railroad is done
So over the mountains and over the plains
Into the Muskage and into the rain
Up to St. Lawrence on the way to Gaspé
Swingin' our hammers and drawin' our pay
Drivin' em in and tyin' 'em down
Away to the bunkhouse and into the town
A dollar a day and a place for my head
A drink to the livin' a toast to the dead
Oh, the song of the future has been sung
All the battles have been won
On the mountain tops we stand
All the world at our command
We have opened up this soil
With our teardrops and our toil

There was a time in this fair land when the railroad did not run
When the wild majestic mountains stood alone against the sun
Long before the white man and long before the wheel
When the green dark forest was too silent to be real
When the green dark forest was too silent to be real
And many are the dead men
Too silent to be real

Thursday, 14 January 2021

Part 1 of your Survival Story

 

Story Plan for your Survival Story

 300 Words due this coming Tuesday. Focus on describing the setting, character(s), mood.

Start with the Setting: Characters and location are introduced.

Let the reader know what the situation is and who is involved. If the reader doesn’t know or have any feelings towards your characters, and doesn’t know where the characters are, then the reader is lost and doesn’t care what happens in your story.


Story needs to be at least a 1,200 words and less than 6,500 words, plan accordingly 








 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                                                                       


                                                                                                  

                                                                                                           

Wednesday, 13 January 2021

Stranded in the Wilds-Survival Story

 


Will you get Home?


THE SCENE

     On a specially designed covid school bus,

taking a field trip to the Museum for Human Rights, you notice a dark funnel shaped cloud. You sound out a warning, but others dismiss you out of hand. A few minutes later everything turns black and your stomach feels as if it is going up in an elevator. The wheels of the bus have stopped making a noise on the pavement and everything starts to spin. The bus is caught in a tornado and is flying through the air! When the bus touches firma cotta it is 55.198626,-98.395293 which is Pisew Falls Provincial Park, Manitoba, Canada. As the bus slowly sinks in the swamp, you and your classmates are able to rescue the following items out of the bus.
2 sleeping bags
3 axes
1-200 m. of heavy rope
3 bus tires
1 can of bug spray
2 boxes of wooden matches
1 bar of soap
1 first aid from the back of the bus
2 large wooden poles
1 bus rear view mirror
1 solar powered paper-shredder
12 tooth brushes
1 jar of water purification tablets
1 GPS unit
3 large tarps
4 water jugs
1 radio antenna
200 chocolate bars
100 tins of canned pears
70 apples
3 Rubric Cubes
1 Pamphlet of Cuba
1 rear door from the bus
20 pounds of chocolate
2 hubcaps
3 compasses
1 Leather rugby ball
35 cans of stew
1 roll of toilet paper
1 book of Canadian short stories
1 extra large sleeping bag
1 Book of The Edible Plants of Manitoba
1 large piece of plywood
1 detailed map of Manitoba 
1 Ms Woodcroft's Tuba
4 flares
1 Ms DaSilva's big mutt Blue
1 bungee cord
     You and your group members are now faced with the task of somehow getting back to 49.883934,-97.275181 - Bruce Middle School, through the remote wilds of Northern Manitoba, in winter. The last words you heard from your teachers before they left in a helicopter is "Good luck getting back home."(The permission form was only valid for a bus trip to the museum, and while that form is still valid, since this is just a detour, there is no permission form for a helicopter ride, and you heard the principal, we need a permission form for a helicopter ride) For the sake of posterity, you will record your adventures. Not all the members of your group may make it back, you yourself may not even make it back to Bruce, but your story needs to be told. 
     

THE PROJECT

This is a project that consists of TWO parts:

I.  Class Work 1st Period

This will involve discussions and decisions by your group. 
With Teacher assistance, you will get into groups, respecting physical distancing. 
 The group will discuss these things.
  1. A code to live by. Some examples are               --Keep Calm and Carry On
    No One gets left behind (an old Marine saying)
    Ohana means family. Family means nobody gets left behind or forgotten (Lilo and Stich)                        Pirate Code-He falls behind, gets left behind          Share your knowledge and resources                                              Talk it Out                                        Shake it Off                                         No one eats till we all eat
  2. What 100 pieces the group will take with them on their trip from the above list of items saved from the swamp. A piece is 1 of something, so 40 cans of pears will be 40 pieces. Your group must be in total agreement on what 100 pieces to take on the trip
  3. Possible uses on your trip for each of all the items saved from the swamp 
  4. How will the items will be carried on the trip?
Using the Handout sheet
  1. Record your group's code
  2. Record what 100 items your group is taking
  3. Write a very brief note for each article saved from the swamp, describing the possible ways that article can be used in your trip back to Bruce and how it will be carried

Tuesday, 12 January 2021

The Cremation of Sam McGee

The Cremation of Sam McGee


There are strange things done in the midnight sun
      By the men who moil for gold;
The Arctic trails have their secret tales
      That would make your blood run cold;
The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
      But the queerest they ever did see
Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
      I cremated Sam McGee.

Now Sam McGee was from Tennessee, where the cotton blooms and blows.
Why he left his home in the South to roam 'round the Pole, God only knows.
He was always cold, but the land of gold seemed to hold him like a spell;
Though he'd often say in his homely way that "he'd sooner live in hell."    2

On a Christmas Day we were mushing our way over the Dawson trail.
Talk of your cold! through the parka's fold it stabbed like a driven nail.
If our eyes we'd close, then the lashes froze till sometimes we couldn't see;
It wasn't much fun, but the only one to whimper was Sam McGee.          3

And that very night, as we lay packed tight in our robes beneath the snow,
And the dogs were fed, and the stars o'erhead were dancing heel and toe,
He turned to me, and "Cap," says he, "I'll cash in this trip, I guess;
And if I do, I'm asking that you won't refuse my last request."                4

Well, he seemed so low that I couldn't say no; then he says with a sort of moan:
"It's the cursèd cold, and it's got right hold till I'm chilled clean through to the bone.
Yet 'tain't being dead—it's my awful dread of the icy grave that pains;
So I want you to swear that, foul or fair, you'll cremate my last remains."

A pal's last need is a thing to heed, so I swore I would not fail;
And we started on at the streak of dawn; but God! he looked ghastly pale.
He crouched on the sleigh, and he raved all day of his home in Tennessee;
And before nightfall a corpse was all that was left of Sam McGee.        6

There wasn't a breath in that land of death, and I hurried, horror-driven,
With a corpse half hid that I couldn't get rid, because of a promise given;
It was lashed to the sleigh, and it seemed to say: "You may tax your brawn and brains,
But you promised true, and it's up to you to cremate those last remains."

Now a promise made is a debt unpaid, and the trail has its own stern code.
In the days to come, though my lips were dumb, in my heart how I cursed that load.
In the long, long night, by the lone firelight, while the huskies, round in a ring,
Howled out their woes to the homeless snows— O God! how I loathed the thing.

And every day that quiet clay seemed to heavy and heavier grow;
And on I went, though the dogs were spent and the grub was getting low;
The trail was bad, and I felt half mad, but I swore I would not give in;
And I'd often sing to the hateful thing, and it hearkened with a grin.        9

Till I came to the marge of Lake Lebarge, and a derelict there lay;
It was jammed in the ice, but I saw in a trice it was called the "Alice May."
And I looked at it, and I thought a bit, and I looked at my frozen chum;
Then "Here," said I, with a sudden cry, "is my cre-ma-tor-eum."

Some planks I tore from the cabin floor, and I lit the boiler fire;
Some coal I found that was lying around, and I heaped the fuel higher;
The flames just soared, and the furnace roared—such a blaze you seldom see;
And I burrowed a hole in the glowing coal, and I stuffed in Sam McGee.

Then I made a hike, for I didn't like to hear him sizzle so;
And the heavens scowled, and the huskies howled, and the wind began to blow.
It was icy cold, but the hot sweat rolled down my cheeks, and I don't know why;
And the greasy smoke in an inky cloak went streaking down the sky.        12

I do not know how long in the snow I wrestled with grisly fear;
But the stars came out and they danced about ere again I ventured near;
I was sick with dread, but I bravely said: "I'll just take a peep inside.
I guess he's cooked, and it's time I looked"; ... then the door I opened wide.

And there sat Sam, looking cool and calm, in the heart of the furnace roar;
And he wore a smile you could see a mile, and he said: "Please close that door.
It's fine in here, but I greatly fear you'll let in the cold and storm—
Since I left Plumtree, down in Tennessee, it's the first time I've been warm."

There are strange things done in the midnight sun
      By the men who moil for gold;
The Arctic trails have their secret tales
      That would make your blood run cold;
The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
      But the queerest they ever did see
Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
      I cremated Sam McGee.




This poem has a distinct rhythm,  a Da Da DUM Da DUM Da Da DUM pattern, and it is slow. Very easy poem to read and follow along.

This poem has internal rhyming, that is lines that rhyme within themselves. See the bold.
It also has a rhyming scheme, AA,BB, or rhyming couplets. See the red. 

The trail was bad, and I felt half mad, but I swore I would not give in;
         And I'd often sing to the hateful thingand it hearkened with a grin.

Oxymoron- Figurative language where contradictory terms are used together. Examples are 'expected surprise,'  'Sweet and Sour.'